Looking for the Sun: Writing


This is a novelisation of the comic. You can also find here the original version of the short story Along the Way (written in 2006 and included in the first "Jigsaw Pieces" short story collection).





Chapter 1: Saryth This is a text version of chapter 1, in which Kite visits a Duke's castle in search of a sun but finds instead a travelling companion. The castle ends up on fire.

Chapter 2: Wings of Fire and Steel This is a text version of chapter 2, in which Kite and Saryth find themselves caught up in the conflict between two warring nations.

Chapter 3: Lightning in the Sky This is a text version of chapter 3, in which Saryth acts without thinking, much to Kite's chagrin.

Chapter 4: One Night's Grace This is a text version of chapter 4, in which both of them have to deal with the consequences of Saryth's over-hasty actions. It is debateable which one ends up with the bigger headache.

Interlude: Kite's Story This is a text version of the short story which comes after chapter 4. It was originally written and drawn for MAMEzine.

Chapter 5: The Gravity of Ideas This is a text version of chapter 5, in which Kite and Saryth investigate the suspicious technology behind the flying machines being used in the war.

Chapter 6: Freedom of Choice This is a text version of chapter 6, in which Saryth comes face to face with someone in a similar position to him who made a different choice.

Chapter 7: Beyond the Endless Sky This is a text version of chapter 7, in which both Kite and Saryth have to make a decision.

Chapter 8: A World of Difference This is a text version of chapter 8, in which Kite and Saryth get very cold, and Saryth starts learning about worlds.

Chapter 9: The Dust of a Peregrine Sun This is a text version of chapter 9, in which there is an abrupt temperature change, and Kite finds out important information.

Chapter 10: Random Encounter This is a text version of chapter 10, in which much world-crossing happens, none of it quite as orderly as Kite would have wished.

Chapter 11: Mistaken Identity This is a text version of chapter 11 in which Kite and Saryth and Aeryn get to know each other amidst the outbreak of a plague.

Chapter 12: The City on the Cliff This is a text version of chapter 12, in which Saryth overreaches himself again.

Chapter 13: Vorannen's Army This is a text version of chapter 13, in which Kite and Saryth are separated.

Chapter 14: Only Tears This is a text version of chapter 14, in which Kite and Saryth largely remain separated, despite their best efforts.

Chapter 15: What Has Gone Before This is a text version of chapter 15, in which Kite and Saryth each have to come to terms with what has happened.

Chapter 16: Unexpected Welcome This is a text version of chapter 16, in which Kite and Saryth attend a wedding and Kite receives a message.

Chapter 17: Words Left Unspoken This is a text version of chapter 17, in which Kite and Saryth return to Vorannen's world and end up in an unfortunate but entirely predictable situation.

Chapter 18: A Time for Subtlety This is a text version of chapter 18, in which Kite bides her time.

Chapter 19: On Borrowed Wings This is a text version of chapter 19, in which Saryth comes up with a good plan.

Chapter 20: Lost Suns and Little Sisters This is a text version of chapter 20, in which Saryth meets Kite's family.

Chapter 21: Lingering Winter This is a text version of chapter 21, in which Kite and Saryth set forth again in search of Aeryn.

Chapter 22: As the Sun Sets This is a text version of chapter 22, in which a snag is discovered.

Chapter 23: Before the Dawn This is a text version of chapter 23, in which unexpected prices are paid.

Chapter 24: A Choice Made Long Ago This is a text version of chapter 24, in which Kite consults with Pyetr and Jig makes her feelings known.

Interlude: Along the Way This was originally a short story written back in 2006 (more as practice writing than anything else). The storytelling and style didn't sit well with the novelisation, so I have edited it - in some places quite severely. The original - which was intended to be standalone, and was published in Jigsaw Pieces 1 - can still be read here.

Chapter 25: Some Dance to Forget This is a text version of chapter 25, in which preparations are made for returning to Vorannen's world.

Chapter 26: Lock Flight This is a text version of chapter 26, in which Kite and Saryth help with locks.

Chapter 27: Of Equal Worth This is a text version of chapter 27, in which many discussions are had.

Chapter 28: Harien's Sun This is a text version of chapter 28, in which Aeryn makes his decision.







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